Hi,
First of all, don't worry about the title; it was probably spur of the moment, evoking a child-like (not child-ish) admiration, and very sweet.
I did like the -- what did you call it -- it's like a poem. I think it's cool the reason you thought to write it -- to me, Suzanne (especially exemplified in Rock in This Pocket) is, lyrically, a champion for the abused. That's what drew me to her at first -- in the songs of "Suzanne Vega" I felt her pulling for me to overcome childhood trauma. And then in Solitude -- "In the Eye" and "Luka" just epitomize the mother lion looking over those she feels for (and In the Eye, looking out for her own safety). Rock in This Pocket, because I am Jewish, perhaps, resonated greatly. I had absolutely no problem with her writing a biblical story.
"Every dream has a name, and names tell your story" -- David Byrne