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AIDS’ (Let’s Stop It)

©2005 Irwin Byron Abrigo

(V1)
I am writing a letter to all doctors today
(to all doctors today)
making a special call to people everywhere
(special call to people everywhere)

(chorus 1)
Aids let’s stop it, can’t you see it’s destroying the world today
Aids let’s stop it, you better listen to what I say
Aids’ let’s stop it, stop it now before it gets too late
Aids’ let’s stop it, let’s stop it now

(V2)
I’m asking people from around the world to volunteer
(people please volunteer)
Let’s all join hands together show how much we care
(come on let’s show how much we care)

(Chorus2)
Aids Let’s stop it, can’t you see we need a cure for today
Aids let’s stop it, don’t let it destroy the human race
Aids let’s stop, you better listen to what I say now
Aids let’s stop it let’s stop it now now

(Bridge)
Too many lives it has taken, you cannot survive
There ain’t no where to run to, there is no here to hide
We must find a solution, our doctors must try
Let’s all come together and try to stop it now yeah

Iet’s stop it now stop it now
Let’t stop it, stop it now
Let’s stop it now,
(Repeat V1)